tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4946694550842963375.post6521110703361470430..comments2017-04-10T19:59:17.523-04:00Comments on WITCH: Chapter Eleven: Into the Forestkatdelvalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11631444315858556877noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4946694550842963375.post-67701106196604811782012-12-10T12:10:00.832-05:002012-12-10T12:10:00.832-05:00Thanks so much for the feedback! I do am so glad t...Thanks so much for the feedback! I do am so glad that you are enjoying it. My classes are nearing the end of this quarter, so the next installment is on its way, and it's going to be something a little different so please stay tuned!katdelvalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11631444315858556877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4946694550842963375.post-34964130869378622432012-12-07T21:24:54.619-05:002012-12-07T21:24:54.619-05:00Wow, I've been having a Witch marathon lately....Wow, I've been having a Witch marathon lately. I really wish I found this story sooner. The twists were so unexpected!<br />I had a feeling that Corynne becoming Lothar's queen wouldn't go over so smoothly, but no way did I picture Ivaine to slither her way in the way she did. <br />Amea's detrioriating health has me really worried.I really loved the way you described heartbreak as another form of an illness. It really speaks volumes about Corynne's character that she could put her pain aside and be so happy and loyal during Keiry's pregnancy. You wrote about her internal strife so perfectly. The death of Sabryn and her babies really had me worried for Keiry's future. But the silver lining was seeing Lathian come to the rescue, by way of Corynne and Markius's awesome plan of course.<br /><br />Every character is so well defined, from the characters that I love to hate (Galaea and Ivaine, Litham and the Queen) to the characters you can't help but feel for.(Corynne and Lothar, Keiry and Lathian)<br />At first, I had my suspicions about this Markius fellow, but he definitely won me over in this episode the way he came through for Corynne. I could go on and on, but I'll just have to wait for the next installment. Great story! =) Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4946694550842963375.post-54333039438065053972012-11-20T11:20:31.513-05:002012-11-20T11:20:31.513-05:00Thanks, Winter! I really appreciate that. And you&...Thanks, Winter! I really appreciate that. And you're right about Keiry. It is easier for her to believe what she was always taught than to stray from it. I think that's true for most people. We'll have to wait and see where her beliefs stand when all of the events of this story have unfolded...katdelvalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11631444315858556877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4946694550842963375.post-6870093981508409472012-11-19T21:01:52.898-05:002012-11-19T21:01:52.898-05:00I just finished reading the story so far, and I ab...I just finished reading the story so far, and I absolutely love it! The characters are so well drawn, and the plot is always interesting. Looking forward to the next update :D<br /><br />I'm with Van, I hope they can be a family one day. Keiry's got the inkling in her, if she can overcome the doctrines of the Sisterhood. I think it would take some time before that would truly make her happy, though. As you said, she's grown up in the Sisterhood. She doesn't seem to have Corynne's spirit of independence.<br />Winterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16869680359163911803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4946694550842963375.post-45851511246969573642012-11-16T12:10:56.551-05:002012-11-16T12:10:56.551-05:00Thank you! I am really glad that you are enjoying ...Thank you! I am really glad that you are enjoying it. And I'm working on it ;)katdelvalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11631444315858556877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4946694550842963375.post-88673573067023348322012-11-16T08:09:43.721-05:002012-11-16T08:09:43.721-05:00I am completely enthralled by this story! More upd...I am completely enthralled by this story! More updates! Please! haha. peacelovechaoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01177588189599338451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4946694550842963375.post-30613195451007506282012-11-13T19:09:58.835-05:002012-11-13T19:09:58.835-05:00Maybe :) Keiry was born and raised in the Sisterho...Maybe :) Keiry was born and raised in the Sisterhood and she is pretty indoctrinated. At this point, she still believes what Galaea preaches, even though she stands by Corynne because they are besties. Deep down, she *cough* ~might~ have feelings for Lathian, but she does not entertain those thoughts because of what she was taught. But as for the future, who knows? She just might change her mind. And as for Ivaine, you do have a point there. She just as easily could ;)katdelvalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11631444315858556877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4946694550842963375.post-73068291984097400102012-11-13T15:11:07.980-05:002012-11-13T15:11:07.980-05:00Yay, the plan worked! I'm glad that Keiry and ...Yay, the plan worked! I'm glad that Keiry and Lathian's son will be taken care of (although I do hope that maybe one day, all three of them could be a family? With Corynne as the honorary aunt?). Keiry's right too; she could hardly have been the first witch to grow attached to her son.<br /><br />I still think Galaea might be getting ahead of herself, though. The prophecies can't be accurate a hundred percent of the time. Ivaine could just as easily have a boy, or a stillborn.Vanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09325395792013382406noreply@blogger.com